Zoos are inhumane and should be abolished. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Entertainment practices on

animals

for the purpose of earning money are widely accepted in

this

current times as a transformative way of

circuss

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circus

circuses

in the past. I strongly disagree with

this

act in two following respects ;

First,

animal

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need

a

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good welfare to sustain their life, not only physical

healths

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but

also

stress factors.

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, a penguin

require

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specific environmental aspects,

such

as a cold climate and a sufficient food nutrient to maintain their well-being. These factors may not amply be provided by the zoo management, because of financial and

enviromental-manipulation

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environmental-manipulation

technique

constraint

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.

As a result

,

animals

are unable to reap their welfare properly. So,

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a sanctuary or a conversation in

natural

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park is the best way and

benign

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for the

animals

.

Second,

animal

comercialization

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commercialisation

is likely

affected

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the conservation of endangered animal effort by its motive to get profits and butterfly effect on publications.

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,

zoo

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seems

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generated

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enormous

amount

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of money annually.

By the

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report that may be produced

from

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the business, will entice people to take the same way for

same

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purposes.

Therefore

, if it

become

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a herd in society, the practices

to hunt

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of hunting

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animals

will surge.

Thus

, many

animals

may become extinct in unexpected

number

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.

Thus

, business

entity

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need to provide meticulously monetization of animal entertainment practices to avert the imminent problems.

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, despite the money

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by

zoo

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, animal welfare and conservation

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need to be a salient consideration. By which, most interests can be accommodated. I suggest

to make

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a more wild-life area to make

a

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better entertainment and

an

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education purpose.