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The table gives information about the value of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table gives information about the value of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares the worth of
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 exports from New Zealand to 5 countries in three years, 2010, 2011 and 2012. Looking from an
overall
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 viewpoint,
while
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 an upward trend was witnessed in the figures for
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 exports to Japan, China and Russia, the other two countries experienced a decline in their amount of
kiwi
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 fruits imported.
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, exported kiwis to Japan were generally more valuable than the rest of the table in all chosen examined years. In 2010, around 271
million
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dollars
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 of kiwis were imported into Japan from New Zealand, considerably higher than the second-runner China at almost 75
million
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dollars
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.
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 number
then
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 surged dramatically in the following two years, reaching a peak of 325
million
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dollars
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 in 2012. The lowest value of kiwis was displayed in Saudi Arabia’s figure throughout the chosen period, with only 290, 106 and 82
million
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dollars
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 entering
this
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 country in 2010, 2011 and 2012, respectively. In terms of the remaining countries, the value of
kiwi
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 fruits imported into China increased substantially from roughly 75
million
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dollars
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 in 2010 to 94
million
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dollars
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 in 2013. Russia
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 climbed by 1.5
million
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 over time,
although
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 the change was not as significant as other nations.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words kiwi, million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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