The graphs below show the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

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visitors

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went to

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specific

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over an eight-year period from 2010 to 2017, and

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compares the

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of holidaymakers who have stayed on cruise

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with those who stayed on

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island

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at the corresponding time.

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,

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the total

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of

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followed an upward trend,

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the

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of

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staying on

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and

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island

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.

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there used to be more settlers on

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until 2015,

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of the period

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of

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staying on

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island

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overtook their place. Total

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of holidaymakers seeing

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island

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was 1

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individuals in 2010.

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doubled in 2013 following some gradual increases, prior to reaching a

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plateau

from 2015 to 2016 with approximately 2.7

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tourists

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. In the final year

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of

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soared and reached a peak of 3.5

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visitors

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in 2017. From 2010 to 2013, the

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of

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staying on

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the ship

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ship

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ships

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was fluctuating

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, unlike those

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staying on

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island

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reaching a high of 1.5

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tourists

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. Since

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the

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of

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staying on cruise

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witnessed slight rises which has led to

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to

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2

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,

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the

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of

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staying on

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island

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did not change, except a mere decrease in 2016.