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The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.

The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.
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The line graph displays the global
demand
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 for different types of fibre from 1980 to 2015. The fibres taken into account are
polyester
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,
cotton
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, cellulosic and wool and the
demand
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 is measured in
million
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tons
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.
Firstly
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,
it is clear that
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polyester
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 has the highest growth with a stark increase right around 1995.
Secondly
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, the other two fibres,
cotton
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 and cellulosic have seen slight increases in
demand
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 over the years. Unlike the steep rise of
polyester
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,
cotton
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 had a more gradual increase in
demand
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.
Although
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 cellulosic saw a slight decline after 1985, fibre saw a rise in
demand
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 near the millennium.
Thirdly
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, the only textile to have seen a visible decline is wool dropping to a slightly lower
demand
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 level in 2015 than in 1980.
While
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polyester
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 led the
demand
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 in 2015 with almost 70
million
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tons
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,
cotton
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 had the highest
demand
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 in 1980 with more than 10
million
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tons
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.
On the other hand
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, the lowest demands have consistently been seen in the same textile: wool.
Moreover
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, the
demand
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 levels have remained at approximately 2
million
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tons
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 despite the rise and decline over the years.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words demand, polyester, cotton, million, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global demand
  • Textile industry
  • Natural fibers
  • Synthetic fibers
  • Manufacturing advancements
  • Fashion trends
  • Consumer preferences
  • Economic factors
  • Purchasing power
  • Eco-friendly materials
  • Market share
  • Production capacity
  • Polyester
  • Cotton
  • Wool
  • Nylon
  • Demand curve
  • Sustainability
  • Textile innovation
  • Fluctuations
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