The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014.
The table illustrates how the catches and imports of fish vary from 2004 to 2014
into
Perth, Australia.
In 2010 companies barely import any products. Change preposition
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This
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later, fluctuating in the following years and Wrong verb form
changed
finally
reaching around 400 in 2016. After 2017 Linking Words
however
, it drops to below 200. Individual activities are Linking Words
also
rather insignificant, especially from 2010 to 2015. In 2016 Linking Words
however
, numbers Linking Words
reach
around 400, but it ultimately levels off to less than 200 in 2020, just like companies.
Even though vessels stand at around 100, there is a dramatic increase in 2011, followed by a drastic decrease. Over the years the results reached by vessels fluctuate.
All in all,Wrong verb form
reached
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