The bar chart shows the amount of money which was invested by different museums in London.

The bar chart shows the amount of money which was invested by different museums in London.
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The provided bar chart compares how much money was allocated by four different museums in London;
History
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, National, British, and Science
Museum
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, from June to October. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, August experienced the biggest investment, and it was seen that the second most money was invested mostly in September. Taking a look at the data
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June, the
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Science
Museum
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spent the biggest money at about 430000, but the amount of
Brisith
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British
and the
History
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Museum
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was similar around 400000. The lowest one was the National
Museum
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, which was approximately half of the other three museums. Obviously, the budget invested
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the
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British
and the
History
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Museum
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rose drastically
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August, by almost 300000 and 200000, respectively. These two museums had a downward trend throughout the remaining period.
At the end
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of the period,
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October, the British
Museum
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took first place with 450000 and the Science
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museum
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occupied second
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300000. It was followed by the
History
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Museum
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with 250000, and the National
Museum
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hit the low with below 200000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words history, museum with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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