The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbear island between 2010 and 2017.
The given line chart provides information on the proportion of
travelers
who hit Change the spelling
travellers
caribbear
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Caribbean
island
in the 7-year Use synonyms
period
from 2010-2011. Units are measured in Use synonyms
millions
.
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Overall
, the total inflow of tourists grew over the given Linking Words
period
. Use synonyms
Similarly
, the Linking Words
numbers
of visitors who Fix the agreement mistake
number
peferred
to stay on Correct your spelling
preferred
cruise
ships and on Use synonyms
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island
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islands
also
increased.
In 2010, Linking Words
total
of Add an article
a total
1million
tourists Correct your spelling
1 million
recorded
on Add a missing verb
were recorded
caribbear
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Caribbean
island
, from which around 0.6 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
millions
stayed on Change to singular
million
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cruise
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a cruise
the cruise
ship
, Fix the agreement mistake
ships
wheresa
0.4million on Correct your spelling
whereas
where
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island
. Afterwards, the population of immigrants in total rose over the given Add an article
the island
periods
, reaching Fix the agreement mistake
period
3.5millions
in 2017, which was the highest of all time.
Correct your spelling
3.5 million
Initially
, Staying on Linking Words
cruise
ships was people´s first choice over the Use synonyms
island
. There was continuous growth in the percentage of people spending their holidays on Use synonyms
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cruise
, hereby ending the Add an article
a cruise
the cruise
period
with 1.5 Use synonyms
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millions
. Change to singular
million
Coversely
, In Correct your spelling
Conversely
case
of Correct article usage
the case
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Island
, there Correct article usage
the Island
was
seen some fluctuations till 2012, Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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however
there was Add a comma
however,
gradual
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a gradual
increament
till the end of the Correct your spelling
increase
period
. It Use synonyms
touches
its peak, at 2 Wrong verb form
touched
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millions
, in 2017, overtaking the figure Change to singular
million
of
Change preposition
for
cruise
ships.Use synonyms
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