The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the innovation of the floor at the central library 20 years ago and how it looks at the moment.
Overall
, it is obvious that there are a huge number of changes to the library’s plan in terms of education and commercial.
According to
the diagrams, tables and chairs at the centre of the layout were removed. At the top left-hand corner, there was an area with CDs, videos and computer games. However
nowadays, all parts of the room
have been transformed with 2 sofas, children’s fiction books
and storytelling events. Moreover
, children's books
in the place at the northeast have been changed into a lecture room
. In addition
, the most significant adjustment that can be easily seen is that adult fiction books
on the west floor were replaced with all reference books
and there is an addition of an information desk and self-service machines in the east.
The reading room
at the left at the bottom left-hand corner has been developed technologically and become a new computer room
. Last
but not least, the room
at the bottom right-hand corner with the enquiry desk is adjusted commercially into a café.Submitted by k2englishcenter on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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