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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate the innovation of the floor at the central library 20 years ago and how it looks at the moment.
Overall
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, it is obvious that there are a huge number of changes to the library’s plan in terms of education and commercial.
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 the diagrams, tables and chairs at the centre of the layout were removed. At the top left-hand corner, there was an area with CDs, videos and computer games.
However
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 nowadays, all parts of the
room
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 have been transformed with 2 sofas, children’s fiction
books
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 and storytelling events.
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, children's
books
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 in the place at the northeast have been changed into a lecture
room
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.
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, the most significant adjustment that can be easily seen is that adult fiction
books
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 on the west floor were replaced with all reference
books
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 and there is an addition of an information desk and self-service machines in the east. The reading
room
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 at the left at the bottom left-hand corner has been developed technologically and become a new computer
room
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.
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 but not least, the
room
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 at the bottom right-hand corner with the enquiry desk is adjusted commercially into a café.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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