The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words. What implications do the indicators have for the countries? You should write at least 150 words.
The given figure shows the 4 different aspects of social and economic for 4 nations in 1994 based on statistics
of
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from
United
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the United
Nation
.
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Nations
Overall
, it can be seen clearly that Canada
and Replace the word
Canadian
Japan
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Japanese
citizens
had better standar
of living and Correct your spelling
standards
other aspect
rather than the Change the wording
another aspect
other aspects
citizens
of Peru
and Zaire
.
As the table showed
, the yearly revenue of the Wrong verb form
shows
citizens
of Japan
and Canada
were
much higher than the other country with 15670 and 11100 USD per Correct subject-verb agreement
was
person
respectively, while
the citizens
Peru
and Change preposition
of Peru
Zaire
were
only had 260 and 130 USD per Unnecessary verb
apply
person
respectively. Further
that
, Correct word choice
apply
Japan
and Canada
had 78% and 76% consecutively in life expectancy at birth where
it was only 68% and 34% in Correct word choice
whereas
Peru
and Zaire
consecutively
.
As it showed Rephrase
apply
from
the table Change preposition
in
also
, the percentage of adult literacy rate in Japan
and Canada
share the same which is at 99% meanwhile in Peru
was at 68% and Zaire
was half of Peru
. In additional
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addition
Japan
and Canada
had plenty supply of daily calories per person
which around 3000 calories while
Peru
and Zaire
had less than 2000 daily calories per person
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