The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words. What implications do the indicators have for the countries? You should write at least 150 words.

The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words. What implications do the indicators have for the countries? You should write at least 150 words.
The given figure shows the 4 different aspects of social and economic for 4 nations in 1994 based on statistics
of
Change preposition
from
show examples
United
Correct article usage
the United
show examples
Nation
Fix the agreement mistake
Nations
show examples
.
Overall
, it can be seen clearly that
Canada
Replace the word
Canadian
show examples
and
Japan
Replace the word
Japanese
show examples
citizens
had better
standar
Correct your spelling
standards
of living and
other aspect
Change the wording
another aspect
other aspects
show examples
rather than the
citizens
of
Peru
and
Zaire
. As the table
showed
Wrong verb form
shows
show examples
, the yearly revenue of the
citizens
of
Japan
and
Canada
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
show examples
much higher than the other country with 15670 and 11100 USD per
person
respectively,
while
the
citizens
Peru
Change preposition
of Peru
show examples
and
Zaire
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
only had 260 and 130 USD per
person
respectively.
Further
that
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
,
Japan
and
Canada
had 78% and 76% consecutively in life expectancy at birth
where
Correct word choice
whereas
show examples
it was only 68% and 34% in
Peru
and
Zaire
consecutively
Rephrase
apply
show examples
. As it showed
from
Change preposition
in
show examples
the table
also
, the percentage of adult literacy rate in
Japan
and
Canada
share the same which is at 99% meanwhile in
Peru
was at 68% and
Zaire
was half of
Peru
. In
additional
Replace the word
addition
show examples
,
Japan
and
Canada
had plenty supply of daily calories per
person
which around 3000 calories
while
Peru
and
Zaire
had less than 2000 daily calories per
person
.
Submitted by misstiasclassroom on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, japan, citizens, peru, zaire, person with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • indicators
  • population
  • GDP per capita
  • life expectancy
  • literacy rate
  • infant mortality rate
  • prosperous
  • less developed
  • level of education
  • healthcare
  • improvements
  • services
What to do next:
Look at other essays: