the chart give information about entertainment venues and their admission in 2009. describe it
The provided data consists of two visual representations. The first report represents the attendance at entertainment venues in 2009
while
the following table represents their admissions. The data was categorized into sports, theme parks, and cinemas.
As depicted in the bar graph, we can observe that cinemas have the highest attendance amongst the other candidates. Whereas
the table graph shows that the cinemas are the cheapest compared to the others. On the other hand
, sports have the smallest amount of attendance, followed by the table graph showing that sports have the most expensive tickets than the other entertainments.
Another noteworthy aspect is the family discount tickets that consist of 4 tickets. The highest price discount goes to theme parks with the normal price of 280 dollars
going to 210 dollars
after the deal. Furthermore
, the lowest discount goes to basketball games which went from 136 dollars
in normal price to 135 dollars
after the deal.Submitted by helma.devina on
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