Many major cities are facing a housing crisis as they cannot provide enough land for new buildings. Some local governments believe the problem could be solved by reassigning park land for residential development, because this land would be better used for housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a great number of major cities are having

housing

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crisis

due to

lack

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a lack

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of

land

for new buildings. Some local

goverments

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governments

are of the view that reassigning

park

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parkland

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land

for residential

development

will resolve the issue as the

land

will be in better use.

This

essay will outline the benefits and drawbacks of

this

proposal

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and will weigh up its merits. On one hand,

this

solution can bring several disadvantages. Foremost is the adverse effect

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the

environment

. Notably,

park

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parkland

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land

is to preserve and plant trees, plants,

flowers

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and flowers

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which are beneficial to our

environment

. With the

increasing

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concerning issue of global

warning

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warming

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and

greenhouse

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effect,

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greens are even more of primary significance to cope with these threats to our earth and

environment

.

On the other hand

,

however

, reassigning

park

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land

for residential

development

is undoubtedly the most efficient and effective solution to deal with

housing

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the housing

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crisis

. The

development

has an immediate need for more

lands

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land

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to build housing. Having said that, the government can actually proportionate the

neccesary

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necessary

park

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parkland

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land

to be reassigned.

For example

, the local

goverment

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government

can come up with a detailed plan on how much margin of

park

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parkland

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land

to be reassigned, the government can

then

use

this

limited portion of

land

to build

high-densed

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high-density

condominiums or apartments to resolve the housing

crisis

. At the same time, the government can

also

refurbish and renovate those old and run-down apartments.

This

will increase its value

and

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make it attractive to other buyers and resolve the housing

crisis

. In conclusion, reassigning

park

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parkland

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land

for residential

development

is an effective

ways

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to resolve

housing

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the housing

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crisis

.

Nevertheless

, we must

also

prioritise our

environment

and strike a balance between protecting

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the environment

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and resolving

housing

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the housing

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crisis

. Refurbishing the old apartments and condominiums would be the alternative to not overly

rely

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relying

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on

park

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parkland

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land

.