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Nowadays governments are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than in building new roads. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In modern times, transportation has become a key factor for day-to-day activities where there are those who say that authorities are investing lots of money in public transport
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 as buses and trains
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 highways and public
roads
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 are declining every day. In
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 essay, I will examine the positive aspects and drawbacks of tourism and provide my
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 opinion.
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, it is a good sign that the government is investing in buses, trains, and metros,
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 has increased the revenue of the nation.
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, the cost of travelling is cheap compared to the other means of personal transit like a car, bike, etc.
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, the area connectivity is so good that people can travel anywhere, anytime.
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, In Bangladesh new metro has been launched, it is called "Express movement", it covers a distance of 50kms in just 30 minutes, which is humanly impossible in a personal vehicle and road connectivity. Adding to
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 point, the development has
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 resulted in less pollution and less traffic.
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, people say that roadways are not being funded by national bodies,
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 is true in most countries. There are many scrap
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 with so many potholes and cracks, that it becomes difficult for the public to go out with their own vehicles. Most of the internal business affairs are conducted through roadways.
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, the movement of petroleum products, agricultural products, etc. The underdevelopment has
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 affected these businesses.
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, I would say the development of society transport over roadways is beneficial because it increases income for the national bodies to run the nation and
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 income will directly or indirectly help in the improvement of
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 as well. In conclusion, people should make use of the facilities provided by the parliament and by doing
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 we are encouraging the development of the country. Definitely road movement is
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 important, but the advantages of parliament-developed transport outweigh the advantages of
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.
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Make sure to provide a clear thesis statement in the introduction that reflects your position on whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
coherence and cohesion
Aim to present each paragraph with one clear central idea to avoid confusion and improve clarity.
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Develop each paragraph fully by explaining how the example provided supports your main point.
coherence and cohesion
Conclusions should succinctly summarize the main points of the essay and clearly state your final opinion without introducing new information.
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