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The diagram shows differences in temperature zones between tropical mountains and temperate mountains Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows differences in temperature zones between tropical mountains and temperate mountains Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagram illustrates the comparison between tropical mountains and temperate hills temperatures, and the given data is measured in
altitude
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 meters and
feet
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.
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, there are a total of five phases in Tropical mountains which involve a series of steps beginning from the warm
zone
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 to permanent
snow
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 and there are four phases for temperate mountains which start from the cool
zone
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 to permanent
snow
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. The process begins for tropical hills from the warm
zone
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 which is suitable for many tropical crops and it continues to the temperature
zone
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 which is up to 1600 meters
altitude
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 and is used to cultivate coffee and cocoa plantations. In the cool
zone
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 grain cultivation is possible and in the forest
zone
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, there are broad-leaf trees that present their height from the ocean as 4000 meters. And above
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 temperature is getting down for Alpine meadows and
snow
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zone
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. Moving
further
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, a temperate mountain cool
zone
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 is suitable for grains, potatoes and flax and it is up to 5000
feet
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 at
altitude
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. From 6500 to 10000
feet
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altitude
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 Alpine meadows are found and above 1000
feet
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 permanent
snow
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 is present.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words altitude, feet, zone, snow with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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