The table below gives give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009
The table provides data about the salaries of secondary/high
school
teachers
In Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg
, Korea and Japan in 2009.
Overall
, in 2009 Luxembourg
had the highest starting salary
, annual salary
and maximum salary
of
secondary/high Change preposition
for
school
teachers
.
As can clearly be seen, Luxembourg
had the highest starting salary
of secondary/high school
teachers
with 80000 dollars
, whereas
Japan had the lowest starting salary
with 28000 dollars
. The salaries of secondary/high school
teachers
in Korea and Australia are pretty similar accounting for 30500 and 34600 dollars
respectively. Luxembourg
had the highest annual salary
(112000 dollars
) and maximum salary
(139000 dollars
) of secondary/high school
teachers
.
Australia had the lowest annual salary
and maximum salary
of secondary/high school
teachers
accounting for 48000 dollars
.
The annual salary
and maximum salary
of secondary and high school
teachers
in Denmark was the same in 2009 accounting for 54000 dollars
. In 2009 Denmark had the lowest years
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number of years
top
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the top
salary
with 8 years
, meanwhile
Korea had the highest Add a comma
meanwhile,
years
taken to reach Correct quantifier usage
number of years
top
Correct article usage
the top
salary
with 37 years
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