The table below gives give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009
The table provides data about the salaries of secondary/high
school
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teachers
In Australia, Denmark, Use synonyms
Luxembourg
, Korea and Japan in 2009.
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Overall
, in 2009 Linking Words
Luxembourg
had the highest starting Use synonyms
salary
, annual Use synonyms
salary
and maximum Use synonyms
salary
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of
secondary/high Change preposition
for
school
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teachers
.
As can clearly be seen, Use synonyms
Luxembourg
had the highest starting Use synonyms
salary
of secondary/high Use synonyms
school
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teachers
with 80000 Use synonyms
dollars
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whereas
Japan had the lowest starting Linking Words
salary
with 28000 Use synonyms
dollars
. The salaries of secondary/high Use synonyms
school
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teachers
in Korea and Australia are pretty similar accounting for 30500 and 34600 Use synonyms
dollars
respectively. Use synonyms
Luxembourg
had the highest annual Use synonyms
salary
(112000 Use synonyms
dollars
) and maximum Use synonyms
salary
(139000 Use synonyms
dollars
) of secondary/high Use synonyms
school
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teachers
.
Australia had the lowest annual Use synonyms
salary
and maximum Use synonyms
salary
of secondary/high Use synonyms
school
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teachers
accounting for 48000 Use synonyms
dollars
.
The annual Use synonyms
salary
and maximum Use synonyms
salary
of secondary and high Use synonyms
school
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teachers
in Denmark was the same in 2009 accounting for 54000 Use synonyms
dollars
. In 2009 Denmark had the lowest Use synonyms
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years
taken to reach Correct quantifier usage
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top
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the top
salary
with 8 Use synonyms
years
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meanwhile
Korea had the highest Add a comma
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years
taken to reach Correct quantifier usage
number of years
top
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the top
salary
with 37 Use synonyms
years
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