The graph shows the differencies in wheat export over the three areas
The line graph depicts wheat exporting in five years among three countries Australia, Canada and the
European
Community
. It is clear that
from the graph the highest export was in Canada in 1988.
Overall
, the Canadian export stood out as the top one
in the period 1985 until 1988, it shows a slight decrease in 1985-1986. However
, it increased in 1986-1988. it dropped swiftly in the last
three years. Although
the European
Community
started declining in 1985-1986, it illustrates a slow climb in 1987-1988. The European
Community
export remained the same in 1987-1988 with no wave. The line riched the highest one
. Moreover
, Australian exports began uplifting in the first year, then
the line drove decreasing to the end, in 1987 Australian exports took the lowest rate at the left of the period.
To sum up
, we could say that Canadian exports began the
top Change preposition
at the
one
and ended Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
second highest. Change preposition
at the
European
Community
was the second highest and at the end
achieved the top one
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