Every year large numbers of people migrate from one country to another for different reasons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of migration for the individual and for society as a whole.
Migration is the process when
people
move from one country
to another country
. Migrating is being done by people
for various reasons and from year to year gaining more popularity. In this
essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of migration for the individual and for the society
as a whole.
Firstly
, the biggest motivation for people
to migrate is because they are aiming to live a better life. There are some advantages they can get if they migrate, such
as getting better job opportunities related to higher salaries, improving standard of living, and also
getting better access to education or healthcare, if, for example
, they migrate from a small country
to a big country
. Moreover
, immigrants can also
learn about new cultures in the immigrated country
and expect faster personal growth. However
, there are some drawbacks related to migration for the individual, such
as language barriers, homesickness, or even, some challenges to adapt in the new society
.
Secondly
, from the society
’s point of view, the benefits are immigrants will fill many job vacancies and even give cultural diversification to the society
. It also
can boost economic growth as more and more people
make some new businesses and give revenue to the government. However
, it also
gives some minuses, such
as making the country
overpopulated and maybe other challenges, for example
, immigrants are not accepted by society
, thus
, creating social tension between people
.
In conclusion, there are several advantages and disadvantages of immigrating that are seen from the individual and society
perspective.Submitted by nadiamanda.salsabilla on
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