The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of a large fish called the salmon.
The diagram illustrates the life span of a huge fish which is known as salmon.
In
this
process, the salmon passes through three different stages as it grows to
an adult fish. Each of these stages takes place in a Change preposition
into
varient
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variety
aquatic
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of aquatic
manner
.
At the very first level, salmon lay eggs around the rocks, hidden among reeds at Fix the agreement mistake
manners
slow moving
upper river. After approximately 5 to 6 months, these are called Add a hyphen
slow-moving
as
fry and grow 3 to 8 cm in length. For the next 4-5 years, these baby salmons live in lower freshwater which is fast flowing. During Change preposition
apply
this
period, their size changes into
12-15cm and Change preposition
to
are
called Correct subject-verb agreement
is
as
smolt.
At Correct your spelling
a
this
level, they move towards open
sea from Add an article
the open
lower
river. After spending almost 5 years, they convert into adult salmons as their size increases and now they are seventy to Add an article
the lower
seventy six
centimetres long. Add a hyphen
seventy-six
Hence
, they again swim to their birth place
where they will lay eggs and the cycle starts again.Correct your spelling
birthplace
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