Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you
Dear Jack,
I hope you have been well. I'm writing to let you know that my country India is now suffering from a natural disaster. I'm feeling sad for all the
people
who are facing this
problem.
Past few days, the weather has been pleasant but some days after, it turned dreadful. You can watch the news on television and in newspapers as it has become headlines. Due to
this
, all regions of the country are being affected. Since it is heavy raining, all the houses and gardens are full of water.
People
are very curious and taking an interest in knowing about this
because it affected a large number of people
and caused significant damage. Dams are opened up which has caused further
destruction to people
's property and even some died along with
animals.
I am very afraid of this
disaster. Even my area was also
part of this
calamity. I have lost my wheat and rice crops which is very bad for me. This
would also
lead to financial instability but somehow I have to manage this
and I will grow new crops in my field. I am still hoping that all will be fine soon. What about your country? Is everything OK there? I pray god to protect
us all from Wrong verb form
protects
this
tragedy.
Best regards
JonasSubmitted by neetpunar on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea. The third paragraph could be divided into two to separate the explanation of people's interest and your personal account of the disaster.
task achievement
Develop your ideas further with more detailed examples or explanations. Mention specific news stories or events to give your friend a clearer picture of the situation.
coherence cohesion
Use linking words and phrases to improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs. This will enhance the logical structure and help the reader follow your points more easily.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite