You had borrowed money from your friend when you were facing some financial problems and forgot to pay it back. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter: ● apologize for being late in returning the money ● explain what happened ● say how you are going to fix the issue now
Dear Ranvir,
I hope you have been well. I am writing to express my gratitude to you as you helped me during my financial crisis. It is just because of you that I could get my father's treatment done. Since I had another issue, I was not able to return your
money
on time.
I'd like to apologize for not paying it back. I knew that you were also
having a monetary situation but still didn't leave me in such
a situation and were ready to help me at any cost. I collected the exact amount of money
I had to pay you. I am very sorry about not making it on time due to
a reason.
I didn't tell you about that my sister got into an accident. She was coming from school and was hit by a vehicle on the road. Due to
severe injuries, she has been admitted to the hospital. I needed some money
for her as well. So, I spent that money
on her medication and treatment.
But now, everything is stable. I got my promotion to a manager position and my salary has increased. I'll be sending you money
by Interac transfer tomorrow. I hope you will forgive me. Let me know when you're free to meet up.
See you soon
VijaySubmitted by neetpunar on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to maintain clarity. Delineating each point will strengthen paragraph structure.
coherence cohesion
Aim to use a wider range of cohesive devices to better link ideas between sentences and across paragraphs, such as transition words and referencing.
task achievement
As for task achievement, make sure to address all parts of the task fully. In this case, further elaboration on how you plan to fix the issue might deepen the response.
task achievement
Maintain an appropriate tone throughout the letter that reflects the formality of the situation. Using overly casual language in an apology letter, especially involving money, could be seen as lacking sincerity.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite