Governments spend more money of railways instead of roads. Agree or disagree
It is argued that governments should invest more
on
the railway system Change preposition
in
instead
of on roads. This
essay agrees that governments should allocate more funds to the improvement of railroads. Firstly
, car and road space are not used efficiently; secondly
, public transport is fast and cheap.
Traffic congestion is caused by commuters travelling to work. These workers tend to travel at the same time, however
, they opt for commuting alone. This
leads to an excess of vehicles on the road resulting in traffic jams during rush hour. For example
, London has a congestion charge that is
paid by road users. The money raised from this
is then
put towards bettering public transport which will benefit many.
Well-designed transport systems are inexpensive and convenient. The individual is only responsible for buying a ticket, mitigating all other fees related to petrol and automobile maintenance. The railroads run on a fixed schedule, allowing for more stability when going to work For instance
, the meteor runs on a 15-minute schedule, thus
, travellers can anticipate when to get on and off without the added burden of traffic.
In conclusion, railroads are a better option, as it
Correct pronoun usage
they
ensures
optimal usage of the travelling space and Correct subject-verb agreement
ensure
allows
people to travel more comfortably and reliably.Correct subject-verb agreement
allow
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Task Response
Ensure that the essay addresses all parts of the task. In the introduction, clearly state your opinion on the topic. In the body paragraphs, expand on each point with clear arguments and relevant examples. Maintain a clear position throughout.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use a range of cohesive devices to structure your essay and connect ideas. Ensure that paragraphs flow naturally from one to the next, and that each paragraph has a clear central idea. Use examples to support your main points effectively.
Your opinion
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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?