The graph below shows the proportion of four different material that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different material that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagram illustrates the recycling activity for 4 different materials in a particular country for the 28-year time span, from 1982 to 2010.
Overall
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, the graph charts show the recycling rate of 4 observed items: paper and cardboard, glass containers, aluminium cans, and plastics, from 1982 to 2010.
While
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the ranking between items was stable for the reported years, there was a high surge for aluminium cans.
First,
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paper and cardboard were always in the top position from 1982 to 2010. Despite increasing to 80% of recycling rate from 1982 to 1994, it kept decreasing to 70% in 2010.
On the contrary
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, the glass containers which were placed in the second rank, showed an inverted pattern where it decreased from 50% to 40% in 1990, before consistently moving up to 60% in 2010. Aluminium cans followed on the third post, showed an impressive run of improvement number from under 10% in 1986 to almost 45% recycling rate in 2010. Plastics,
however
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,
while
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showing the same increment pattern, the record still shows below 10% of recycling activities.
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