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The table and pie charts show the number of research students in Australia Universities in 2001 and 2010

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The pie illustrates the total of research
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 in 2010 and 2010 in Australian universities, with features of local, international, female, and male.
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, during 2010 the local and international
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 were majored in comparison with 2001 year, having almost half of the research precedence international. in the display in 2001 local research
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 had a large portion vs internationals. In 2001 the feature with an insignificant minority are females,
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 male with 9%,
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, International
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 in
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 year represented just 13% to get a total of almost 30 thousand
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 during
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 period.
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, in the second chart for the 2010 year, the total of local
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 was just over similar to the total of
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 in 2010, being almost half of
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 number of international
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 to achieve one total of 54, 081
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