Supermarkets should only sell food produced within their own country. What are your opinions about it?

Nowadays, tremendous advancements in technology and supply chains lead to creating
further
possibilities.
For example
, the import and export of various products to and from all over the world.
Hence
, if going to a supermarket, you see certainly an imported product. It is said that merely domestic products should be sold in stores. There are good arguments for and against
this
statement, and I believe that it depends on some factors. In
this
essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument. To a certain extent, I agree that people should purchase
foods
that are produced in their
country
. Within a
country
, there are numerous people who work as employees in a plethora of food factories. In order to profit, these factories need to have good sales. If we do not purchase from them, they will go bankrupt. Not only that, when
this
trend continues, the manager may lay off staff, leading to an increase in the unemployment rate.
Consequently
,
this
has irreparable consequences for society,
such
as poverty or even crime.
Therefore
, stores should sell local
foods
as much as possible
However
, some
foods
we consume may not be found in our
country
.
This
is
due to
climate conditions or geographical location.
For example
, saffron , which is grown in Iran, needs a tropical climate to grow;
therefore
, it cannot be grown in cold regions. Another example is Switzerland which does not have access to the sea or river; alternatively, the cocoa plant grows naturally in
this
area only.
Thus
, we do not have all of the
foods
in our
country
, and we have to buy imported
foods
.
Hence
, various measures should be taken by the government so that import only the
foods
that are not available inside the county
To conclude
, it is said that only foodstuffs should be sold in the stores that are produced in our
country
.
According to
this
statement, we only can consume the
foods
that are produced in the
country
;
otherwise
, we cannot taste the
foods
that do not grow in the
country
.
Furthermore
, we should prioritize the purchase of domestically produced products so that we support the employees who work in the
country
. In my opinion,
this
sentence cannot be generalized, and it depends on what the item is.
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