Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Persuading people by advertisement has different views whether it generates more attention or loses to gain followers. I believe that some
advertisements
can generate more attraction because of branding in their products and leading benefits for customers. This
essay will explain in detail those views.
Some advertisements
have a powerful attraction to customers because they spread some impact on society with their brand image. The brand is not only gaining trust for the quality but also
retaining the customer with full satisfaction. For example
, the consumer goods from instant noodles in Indonesia with an increasing consumption from time to time. This
is because the sellers provide advertisements
full of benefits from their tastes, adopting Indonesian foods.
On the other hand
, there are no longer followers in particular
advertisements
caused by drawbacks and it does not follow the modern era. Consider the user of Facebook as an example, this
network application always publishes its ads in other social media to gain their trust again. After several negative cases of attacks on this
company involving selling tons of data and losing cyber securities, the number of users in this
app has declined significantly. Furthermore
, the features are traditionally compared with Instagram. As a result
, the published ads would not influence the public to use its technology.
In conclusion, some advertisements
can gain popularity because the products impact the public with a lot of advantages, while
there is no attraction of advertisement caused by the products themselves not following the trend and leading the negative perceptions among societies.Submitted by 2024successielts on
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Introduction & Conclusion
Ensure that your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion that state the topic and your opinion clearly. Aim to make your position known from the beginning and reiterate it in the conclusion for clarity.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use a range of linking words and phrases to show the relationship between ideas, and to help the essay flow more smoothly, avoiding excessive repetition of these terms.
Paragraphing & Main Points
Organize your paragraphs clearly with one main idea per paragraph. Use topic sentences to introduce the main idea of each paragraph, and use examples to support your points effectively.
Task Response
Fully develop your ideas by expanding your explanation and providing more specific examples. Make sure to clearly address the prompt by discussing both views and giving your own opinion.
Grammar & Vocabulary
To improve your score, work on diversifying your grammar structures and vocabulary. Avoid grammar errors and make sure sentences are well-formed and punctuation is used correctly.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
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