The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram
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how
plastic
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bottles
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are recycled,the process consists of about 4 steps,during which
abondaned
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abandoned
abundant
plastic
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bottles
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is
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collected,crushed,washed,heated and reproduced
in to
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raw material. The process commences with collecting a large number of
plastic
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bottles
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abondaned
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abandoned
by residents in
garage
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garbage
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bins, and
then
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they are translated by trucks to the recycling centre, workers there will take the responsibility of selecting and sorting
plastic
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bottles
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that are up to the standard of recycling.
Following
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this
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,massive
plastic
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bottles
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are compressed into
squre
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square
blocks,which will be more
convient
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convenient
for later crushing.When
plastic
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blocks are crushed into small-sized pellets,they will be completely cleaned and washed
by
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water so that they
could
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be reused.
The next step is
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to grind washed pellets into fine
plastic
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powder,and
this
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stage will need a grinder.Subsequent to
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,
these
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powder will be heated to form raw material,which could be used to produce new
plastic
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products,including
plastic
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bottles
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,
plastic
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disposable dishware,reusable shopping bags,T-shirts,pencils and so on.
Overall
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, the stages involved in
recycleing
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recycling
plastice
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plastic
bottles
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have been completed.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • collection
  • recycling centers
  • transported
  • recycling plant
  • sorted
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • shredded
  • flakes
  • melted
  • pellets
  • raw material
  • manufacturing
  • containers
  • clothing
  • recycling loop
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