You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The first
table
illustrates the world
population
for 1950–2000 and makes a prediction of how it will be in 2050. The second table
shows the distribution
of the world
population
in 1950–2000 by region and makes a prediction of how it will be in 2050.
Firstly
, the first table
estimates that the world
population
in 2050 will be 9.0 billion, which means an increase from 2000 by 150%. Having a massive percentage increase in population
like this
may have an effect on the distribution
in various regions.
Secondly
, the later table
shows that Asia had the highest percentage of population
distribution
in the world
for
1950 and 2000. Change preposition
between
Therefore
, the table
estimates that it will also
have the highest population
distribution
in 2050. On the other hand
, Oceania had the lowest population
distribution
in 1950 and 2000, so it will also
be for
2050.Change preposition
in
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words table, world, population, distribution with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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