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The tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first
table
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 illustrates the
world
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population
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 for 1950–2000 and makes a prediction of how it will be in 2050. The second
table
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 shows the
distribution
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 of the
world
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population
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 in 1950–2000 by region and makes a prediction of how it will be in 2050.
Firstly
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, the first
table
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 estimates that the
world
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population
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 in 2050 will be 9.0 billion, which means an increase from 2000 by 150%. Having a massive percentage increase in
population
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 like
this
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 may have an effect on the
distribution
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 in various regions.
Secondly
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, the later
table
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 shows that Asia had the highest percentage of
population
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distribution
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 in the
world
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for
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between
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 1950 and 2000.
Therefore
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, the
table
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 estimates that it will
also
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 have the highest
population
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distribution
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 in 2050.
On the other hand
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, Oceania had the lowest
population
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distribution
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 in 1950 and 2000, so it will
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 be
for
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 2050.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words table, world, population, distribution with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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