The graph below illustrates the amount of travellers using three main airports between 1995 and 2000 in New York City.

The graph below illustrates the amount of travellers using three main airports between 1995 and 2000 in New York City.
The bar chart compared the average tourist utilization of three central airports, namely John F. Kennedy,
LaGuardia
, and Newark, in
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period from 1995 to 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that the level of passengers departing and arriving at
LaGuardia
has increased among two other places. John F. Kennedy had
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fluctuative
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fluctuating
trends from time to time, depicted by the data where it started at roughly 27
million
of
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tourists, right behind
LaGuardia
and just above Newark. They put up the work to eventually
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the percentage of
LaGuardia
in 1997, specifically 48
million
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visitors. But somehow, from 1998 to 1999 the usage of
this
airport decreased by almost 15
million
and gained the use of its place in 2000.
In contrast
,
LaGuardia
drew a steady rise, starting from 35
million
of
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airport users in 1995, slowly working its way by 3-6
million
per year, and had a tremendous level-up in 2000 with the exact number of 69
million
.
On the other hand
, Newark seems to be the calmest flow, where it starts at 15
million
, carefully keeping its way up to 39
million
in 1997, and slightly increase 1
million
until 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words laguardia, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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