You have just returned from a long holiday. While you were away, your friend looked after your house. Write a letter to you friend. In your letter - thank you friend for the things she/he did for you - offer to reimburse any money she/he spent on doing these things - arrange to meet your friend for a coffee late this week.
Dear Guri,
I hope
this
letter finds you healthy and happy as always. I am writing this
letter to tell you that I am very thankful for taking care of my house in my absence.
Firstly
, When I was planning to go on a holiday with my family, I was worried about my house and who would take care of it. But when I talked with you about my situation , I was relaxed and enjoyed my trip. I had a great time
there and did a lot of fun activities. Moreover
, when I came back from vacation after two weeks, I felt astonished after seeing my house as it was well maintained and clean as we left it. I have no words to be thankful for looking after my place. Also
, you spent your precious time
on this
work as you are a busy and working person and you took time
for my work too. I will be ready to pay you the compensation for that as much as you want.
Furthermore
, I am thinking of meeting you for a coffee this
weekend and spending some time
together. It will be a treat from my side to you for being helpful. However
, I would like to meet you this
weekend at Starbucks at 4:00 pm. So, if you are free, please send me a response about the coffee party.
I am very grateful to you and I am looking forward to your answer.
Your Friend,
DamanSubmitted by damandhillon75026 on
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coherence cohesion
Try to make your sentences more concise to improve clarity. For example, instead of 'Firstly, When I was planning to go on a holiday with my family, I was worried about my house and who would take care of it. But when I talked with you about my situation , I was relaxed and enjoyed my trip,' you could write, 'Initially, I was worried about leaving my house during my family holiday, but talking to you put me at ease, allowing me to enjoy the trip.'
coherence cohesion
Be careful with punctuation and capitalization. For instance, 'Firstly, When' should be 'Firstly, when' and '...about my situation , I was relaxed...' should be '...about my situation, I was relaxed...'.
greeting and closing
Consider adding a brief closing sentence expressing anticipation of seeing your friend. For example, 'Can't wait to catch up over coffee!' This will strengthen your closing.
task achievement
You nicely covered all the components of the task prompt, including thanking your friend, offering reimbursement, and arranging to meet for coffee.
suitable writing tone
The tone of your letter is warm and suitable for the context of writing to a friend.
logical structure
Your letter has a clear structure with a logical flow of ideas and appropriate use of paragraphs.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriately friendly, making your letter more personal and engaging.