* The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates information regarding the frequency of tourist
visitors
to a specific Use synonyms
island
in the Caribbean from 2010 to 2017. It is Use synonyms
then
broken down into two categories of accommodation. The former was staying on Linking Words
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
and the latter on the Use synonyms
island
. Use synonyms
Also
, the total Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
is shown in Use synonyms
this
chart.
Linking Words
According to
the given data, the passengers preferred to stay on the Linking Words
island
rather than on Use synonyms
ships
in the early years. Use synonyms
Whereas
, Linking Words
at the end
of the period (2017), the measure of Linking Words
visitors
who stayed on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
(2 million) surpassed those who stayed on the Use synonyms
island
(1 million). Use synonyms
Furthermore
, we are witnessing a decrease in the Linking Words
number
of tourists who stayed on the Use synonyms
island
in 2012 compared to 2011 (about 0.25 million). Use synonyms
This
situation Linking Words
also
applied to the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
who stayed on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
in 2016 compared to 2015. Use synonyms
In addition
, the growth direction of the total Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
has always been upward.
To summarize, at Use synonyms
first,
tourists had more demand to stay on the Linking Words
island
than on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
. In the end, the position of these two has changed and staying on the Use synonyms
island
has become more popular among Use synonyms
visitors
. Use synonyms
Also
, the total Linking Words
number
of travellers on Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
island
has increased steadily over the years.Use synonyms
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