* The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates information regarding the frequency of tourist
visitors
to a specific island
in the Caribbean from 2010 to 2017. It is then
broken down into two categories of accommodation. The former was staying on cruise
ships
and the latter on the island
. Also
, the total number
of visitors
is shown in this
chart.
According to
the given data, the passengers preferred to stay on the island
rather than on ships
in the early years. Whereas
, at the end
of the period (2017), the measure of visitors
who stayed on cruise
ships
(2 million) surpassed those who stayed on the island
(1 million). Furthermore
, we are witnessing a decrease in the number
of tourists who stayed on the island
in 2012 compared to 2011 (about 0.25 million). This
situation also
applied to the number
of visitors
who stayed on cruise
ships
in 2016 compared to 2015. In addition
, the growth direction of the total number
of visitors
has always been upward.
To summarize, at first,
tourists had more demand to stay on the island
than on cruise
ships
. In the end, the position of these two has changed and staying on the island
has become more popular among visitors
. Also
, the total number
of travellers on this
island
has increased steadily over the years.Submitted by MinaDadashi1376 on
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