The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
line chart depicts the percentage of elderly people over 65, from 1940 to 2040 in three regions: Japan
, Sweden, USA. It is clear from the graph that the proportions are expected to be increased significantly by
the next Change preposition
in
two
decades.
According to
what is shown, the USA and Sweden started from about 9% and 7%, after they increased gradually they both fluctuated until reached 17% and 14% by the decade of 2000. After that, the ratio of Sweden's elderly had rocketed, before it experienced a slight dip in the span before 2030 decade. While
the proportion of USA had nearly leveled
for the period between 2000 and 2020. For the upcoming Change the spelling
levelled
two
decades, 2030 and 2040, they are both predicted to climb to reach 25% and 23% respectively.
Regarding Japan
, the percentage started with a modest decrease, it also
leveled
between 1960 and 1980 before it started recovering with a gradual increment that continued till 2020 at about 7%. Change the spelling
levelled
However
, Japan
's old people percentage is expected to substantially rocket to surpass the ratio of the other two
, with an expected rate of 27%.
To sum up
, we could say that even though Japan
had the lowest rate among the three countries, it is still predicted to have the highest rate for the next two
decades.Submitted by shaymaa.khalaf91 on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "rocketed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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