Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about how governments should measure their countries' progress.
While
economic progress is of course essential, I agree with those who believe that other measures of progress are just as important.
There are three key reasons why economic growth is seen as a fundamental goal for countries. Linking Words
Firstly
, a healthy economy results in job creation, a high level of employment, and better salaries for citizens. Linking Words
Secondly
, economic growth ensures that more money is available for governments to spend on infrastructure and public services. Linking Words
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, a government with higher revenues can invest in the Linking Words
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's transportation network, its education system and its hospitals. Use synonyms
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, a strong economy can help a Linking Words
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's standing on the global stage, in terms of its political influence and trading power.
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However
, I would argue that various other forms of improvement are just as significant as the economic factors mentioned above. Linking Words
In particular
, we should consider the areas of social justice, human rights, equality and democracy itself. Linking Words
For example
, the treatment of minority groups is often seen as a reflection of the moral standards and level of development of a society. Perhaps another key consideration when judging the development of a modern Linking Words
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should be how well that Use synonyms
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protects the natural environment, and whether it is moving towards environmental sustainability. Alternatively, the success of a nation could be measured by looking at the health, well-being and happiness of its residents.
In conclusion, the economy is obviously a key maker of a Use synonyms
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's success, but social, environmental and health criteria are equally significant.Use synonyms
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