Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about how governments should measure their countries' progress.
While
economic progress is of course essential, I agree with those who believe that other measures of progress are just as important. There are three key reasons why economic growth is seen as a fundamental goal for countries.
Firstly
, a healthy economy results in job creation, a high level of employment, and better salaries for citizens.
Secondly
, economic growth ensures that more money is available for governments to spend on infrastructure and public services.
For example
, a government with higher revenues can invest in the
country
's transportation network, its education system and its hospitals.
Finally
, a strong economy can help a
country
's standing on the global stage, in terms of its political influence and trading power.
However
, I would argue that various other forms of improvement are just as significant as the economic factors mentioned above.
In particular
, we should consider the areas of social justice, human rights, equality and democracy itself.
For example
, the treatment of minority groups is often seen as a reflection of the moral standards and level of development of a society. Perhaps another key consideration when judging the development of a modern
country
should be how well that
country
protects the natural environment, and whether it is moving towards environmental sustainability. Alternatively, the success of a nation could be measured by looking at the health, well-being and happiness of its residents. In conclusion, the economy is obviously a key maker of a
country
's success, but social, environmental and health criteria are equally significant.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standard of living
  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
  • economic prosperity
  • healthcare system
  • education system
  • cultural diversity
  • policy decisions
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