the map shows developments, which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.

the map shows developments, which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.
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The map illustrates the transformations that have taken place within the bookstore over the past two decades.
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, as can be seen, there are some significant changes in the library which new features are attached including tables and a cafe. The sections of the book are transformed into a new design excluding three of them that remained the same. In 2000, there was a travel zone in front of the entrance door and new books in the middle of the left side to the right of
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, there was a service desk and non-fiction area. In the left corner from the exit door, there was a fiction segment which was noticeable as the most number of records came. In the middle of the library, there are three categories to read which can be looked up
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as art, hobbies and cookery.
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, travel, new books and service desk are unchanged
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the fiction area is divided into 5 categories of text area (art, hobbies, cookery, fiction and non-fiction in the right corner). Compared to the past, the desk has been replacing the category booklet and there is a new cafe that took over the non-fiction place.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • depicts
  • changes
  • occurred
  • transformations
  • developments
  • span
  • visual
  • comparison
  • illustrates
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