Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map illustrates the two possible different areas for a new shopping
center
.
Change the spelling
centre
Overall
, it is clear that
both sites are placed
close to the railway and the road, and Verb problem
situated
also
their distance from the city centre are similar.
Looking more closely at the figure, the first possible area
S1 is situated at
the northern part of the city of Brandfield, between the housing Change preposition
in
area
, city center
and the river. Turning to the other possible Change the spelling
centre
area
, which is named S2, its location is at
the south-eastern part of the town. Similar Change preposition
in
with
S1, the railway and the road are close to Change preposition
to
this
area
. In addition
, S2 seems closer to the industrial area
rather than the housing units. Moreover
, the river, which runs the town from the north to the south appears far away from the site of S2, while
it is close to other field
. Change the wording
another field
other fields
Finally
, it is evident that the distance between the golf center
and the S2 site is longer than the distance between the S1 and the golf Change the spelling
centre
center
.Change the spelling
centre
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words center, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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