The graph showed data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Lonodn 2000-2010

The graph showed data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Lonodn 2000-2010
The graph gives information about the yearly
income
of three bakeries in London over a
period
of 10
years
from 2000 to 2010.
Overall
, It can be seen that Robbia’s bakery and Bernie’s buns showed an upward trend,
while
the Lovely Loaves experienced a downward trend.
To begin
with, the percentage of annual earnings for Robbia’s bakery was around 58,000
Pounds
in 2000, and it remained stable for the next five
years
.
Subsequently
, It increased dramatically to around 64,000
Pounds
in 2007, in 2008 it jumped to about 100,000
Pounds
and
at the end
of
period
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, it was above 102,000
Pounds
in 2010. As for Bernie’s Buns in 2000, the ratio of yearly
income
was around 20,000
Pounds
.
However
, it increased for the next three
years
to around 45,000
Pounds
, and it still stable for the next four
years
, 2007 it showed an upward trend of about 60,000
Pounds
, and it increased drastically to 62”000
at the end
of the
period
in 2010 The
income
of Lovely Loaves was the highest at the beginning of the
period
about 82,000
Pounds
in 2000, it fluctuated in the first four
years
and
then
plunged to half in 2010, which means it had the lowest
income
of all three bakeries.
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