The table illustrates secondary and high school teachers’ earnings in Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Japan and Korea in 2009.
The given table illustrates the comparison of wages that the teachers of secondary/high schools in Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Japan, and Korea received in 2009. Units are measured in dollars and
years
.
Overall
, it can be seen that Luxembourg had stood with the highest earnings, it also
starts to increase by 15 years
and could reach 132.000 as a maximum salary
. In contrast
, Australia could only raise their salary
by 9.000 after working for 15 years
and wouldn't increase anymore. Slightly similar to Australia, Denmark had also
increased their salary
from 45.000 to 54.000 and stopped at that number.
Meanwhile, Japan and Korea stood at 34.000 and 30.000, respectively, and could rise to 10.000-31.000 by 15 years
of working. Not only that, the salary
would eventually go up, because they have a maximum wage of around 62.000-82.000.Submitted by zefanyagyu on
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