The table shows about underground railway system
The table represents the whole information about an underground
railway
system builds
in various cities Wrong verb form
built
of
America with Change preposition
in
total
number of travellers during different Change the article
a total
the total
period
of time.
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periods
Overall
, the
London was the first city Correct article usage
apply
who
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that
started
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start
underground
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an underground
railway
facility at maximum speed while
the brand new railway
station in Los Angeles designed
for Add a missing verb
was designed
least
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the least
kilometer
of Change the spelling
kilometre
route
. Add an article
the route
In addition
to this
, majority
of the passengers Correct article usage
the majority
preffered
to use the underground Correct your spelling
preferred
railway
lines of Tokyo.
In the year
1863, the railway
lines build
underground in London created for Wrong verb form
built
the
route of 394 Correct article usage
a
kilometer
which is completely opposite in regards to Change the spelling
kilometre
kyoto
in the Change the capitalization
Kyoto
year
1981 with 11 kilometer
of Change the spelling
kilometre
route
. Meanwhile, the progress Add an article
the route
took
place during the middle years 1900, 1927, and 1976 were 199km, 155km, and 126km for Paris, Tokyo, and Washington DC respectively.
Correct pronoun usage
that took
However
, with the average speed Tokyo hold
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holds
the
1,927 Correct article usage
apply
millions
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million
of
travellers per Change preposition
apply
year
. Likewise
, the people
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number of people
used
Paris's underground Wrong verb form
using
railway
facility per year
was 1,191 million which was more than 30% of the passengers in London. Additionally
, the
Los Angeles and Correct article usage
apply
the
Kyoto provided service to approximately 50 million people per Correct article usage
apply
year
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