In some countries, owning a home is more important rather than renting one. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Numerous

people

argue that in some nations possessing a house is necessary than renting one. In my view, various reasons

from be

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the owner of

house

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and there are benefits from having a

home

rather than

rent

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instead

. In general,

place

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of residence is

primary

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needs

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for individuals. There are several reasons in part of states that

people

pick to

bought

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a

home

rather than renting. Foremost, a

home

is extremely crucial for citizens than others demand

this

provides a sense of security and stability. It is

long-term

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investment that can provide a safe haven for families and future generations. It

also

provides a sense of belonging and pride as homeowners take care of their property and make improvements to add value to their

home

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.

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, the price of a habitation from year to year is certainly high-priced, as

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results

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, humans are saving in purpose to buy a residence.

In

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contrary

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,

this

case might be beneficial

compare

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to the drawbacks.

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renting is to facilitate and make it easier for

people

to

owning

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a temporary

home

,

however

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humans who decide to stay for a long time could be hassle and ineffective.

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, humans must be moving around every

years

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or if the limited period from the house

is

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expired.

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, non-permanent

residence

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is

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genuinely kind of

wasting

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time and money

due to

the fact that individuals must

be pay

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rent every certain

durations

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. In conclusion,

it is clear that

there are various reasons for

people

to be the

owner

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owners

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of their

home

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homes

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in

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apply

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compared to borrowing, and I would argue that the benefits

itself

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outweigh the drawbacks.