The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart
illustrate
the popularity of 5 popular Instagram accounts (Cristiano Ronaldo, The Rock, Arian Grande, Kylie Jenner and Selena Gomez) in 2018 and 2021. Change the verb form
illustrates
Unites
are measured in Correct your spelling
Units
millions
.
Overall
, all the
five accounts Correct article usage
apply
had shown
a significant Wrong verb form
showed
increased
in the given period, Replace the word
increase
while
Cristiano Ronaldo has
the most Wrong verb form
had
fans
in the last
year
. The remaining four accounts reach
about the same Wrong verb form
reached
number
of fans
I
the Correct your spelling
in
last
year
.
Cristiano Ronaldo had about 110 millions
Change to singular
million
fans
in the first year
and the numbers had dramatic
Wrong verb form
dramatically
increase
to about 320 Replace the word
increased
millions
, which has the highest Change to singular
million
number
of supporters. The rock started at
about 100 Change preposition
with
millions
supporters, who had the least Change to singular
million
supported
in the first Replace the word
support
year
, had also
increase
double the Wrong verb form
increased
number
, approximately
260 Change preposition
to approximately
millions
. Change to singular
million
Similarly
, Arian Grande, Kylie Jenner and Selena Gomez started with about 120 millions
Change to singular
million
fans
and also
increase
double the Wrong verb form
increased
number
to about 250 millions
Change to singular
million
fans
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words millions, fans, year, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
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