The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie charts compare the
ages
of Yemenis and Italians between 2000 and future
predictions for 2050.
Overall
, although
in 2000, Yemeni teenagers had a wider proportion of the population
, it is predicted that Correct article usage
the adult’s
adult’s
portion will increase slightly. Change noun form
adult
While
adult Italians show
a major portion in 2000, it will be subsided by adults and seniors’ people in the future
.
In 2000, the youngest accounted for almost half of the overall
age of the population
, which will be decreased
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future
and account for 37.0% only. Whereas
adults show
a ratio of just under half of overall
ages
, it will increase slightly to 57.3% in the future
. However
, the oldest represents a
smallest proportion of all, highlighting that in 2000 and 2050, the percentage of 60+ age years of Change the article
the
Yemen
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the Yemen
population
account for 3.6% and 5.8% in the future
respectively.
In contrast
, Italians show
a different result. In 2000, 61.6% of Correct article usage
the population's
population's
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the population's
ages
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was
were
around 15-59 years old which will Correct subject-verb agreement
was
be decreased
in the Wrong verb form
decrease
future
and is predicted to be just under half of the overall
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Although
,
0-14 years old children account for 14.3% of the Remove the comma
apply
population
, it will be dropped slightly in the future
to 11.5%. furthermore
, the elder citizens of Italy show
a dramatic proportion, starting with the population
of
elderly was Change preposition
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accounted
for 24.1% which will rise significantly and expected that the portions of elder people increase marginally, accounting for 42.3% of Wrong verb form
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ages
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