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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
#information #ages #populations #yemen #projections
The pie charts compare the
ages
 of Yemenis and Italians between 2000 and
future
 predictions for 2050.
Overall
,
although
 in 2000, Yemeni teenagers had a wider proportion of the
population
, it is predicted that
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the adult’s
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adult’s
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adult
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 portion will increase slightly.
While
 adult Italians
show
 a major portion in 2000, it will be subsided by adults and seniors’ people in the
future
. In 2000, the youngest accounted for almost half of the
overall
 age of the
population
, which will
be decreased
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decrease
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 in the
future
 and account for 37.0% only.
Whereas
 adults
show
 a ratio of just under half of
overall
ages
, it will increase slightly to 57.3% in the
future
.
However
, the oldest represents
a
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the
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 smallest proportion of all, highlighting that in 2000 and 2050, the percentage of 60+ age years of
Yemen
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the Yemen
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population
 account for 3.6% and 5.8% in the
future
 respectively.
In contrast
, Italians
show
 a different result. In 2000, 61.6% of
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the population's
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population's
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the population's
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ages
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was
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were
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was
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 around 15-59 years old which will
be decreased
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decrease
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 in the
future
 and is predicted to be just under half of the
overall
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age
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ages
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age
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.
Although
,
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 0-14 years old children account for 14.3% of the
population
, it will be dropped slightly in the
future
 to 11.5%.
furthermore
, the elder citizens of Italy
show
 a dramatic proportion, starting with the
population
of
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elderly was
accounted
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accounting
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 for 24.1% which will rise significantly and expected that the portions of elder people increase marginally, accounting for 42.3% of
ages
 in people.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ages, future, population, show with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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