The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

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of Yemenis and Italians between 2000 and

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predictions for 2050.

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in 2000, Yemeni teenagers had a wider proportion of the

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, it is predicted that

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portion will increase slightly.

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adult Italians

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a major portion in 2000, it will be subsided by adults and seniors’ people in the

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. In 2000, the youngest accounted for almost half of the

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in the

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and account for 37.0% only.

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a ratio of just under half of

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, it will increase slightly to 57.3% in the

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.

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smallest proportion of all, highlighting that in 2000 and 2050, the percentage of 60+ age years of

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account for 3.6% and 5.8% in the

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respectively.

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a different result. In 2000, 61.6% of

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around 15-59 years old which will

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in the

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and is predicted to be just under half of the

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0-14 years old children account for 14.3% of the

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, it will be dropped slightly in the

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to 11.5%.

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, the elder citizens of Italy

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a dramatic proportion, starting with the

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for 24.1% which will rise significantly and expected that the portions of elder people increase marginally, accounting for 42.3% of

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in people.