The map below show the changes that acurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
The maps demonstrate the changes which had taken place in Willington between 1780 to 2000.
Overall
, the whole city had experienced significant industrialization and modernization, with amenities and infrastructures.
Regarding 1780 and 1860, a notable change was the demolition of two farms. Moreover
, there used to be more woods in southeast
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the southeast
however
, most of them had been chopped down. Another striking change had been the increase of villages. In addition
, there had been a dramatic increase in the number of homes, which made the city more vibrant. Furthermore
, a new road had been constructed, in order to make transportation easier for people. Also
, a bridge was added over the river.
Comparing the years 1860 and 2000, lots of shops had been constructed near the river. Another striking change had been the construction of schools. Three sports fields had been built near the school. Moreover
, the number of villages had doubled, and there had been a remarkable rise in the number of houses. In addition
,a new road was built near the school, in order to make students transport easily to school. Finally
, the dramatic development was that a wetland had been added for birds.Submitted by Ah.mahdavi1365 on
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