The map below show the changes that acurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

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The maps demonstrate the changes which had taken place in Willington between 1780 to 2000.

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, the whole city had experienced significant industrialization and modernization, with amenities and infrastructures. Regarding 1780 and 1860, a notable change was the demolition of two farms.

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, there used to be more woods in

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, most of them had been chopped down. Another striking change had been the increase of villages.

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, there had been a dramatic increase in the number of homes, which made the city more vibrant.

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, a new road had been constructed, in order to make transportation easier for people.

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, a bridge was added over the river. Comparing the years 1860 and 2000, lots of shops had been constructed near the river. Another striking change had been the construction of schools. Three sports fields had been built near the school.

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, the number of villages had doubled, and there had been a remarkable rise in the number of houses.

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,a new road was built near the school, in order to make students transport easily to school.

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, the dramatic development was that a wetland had been added for birds.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

193 words

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The map below show the changes that acurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

The growth of online shopping will one day lead to stops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?