General Task 1 You would like to reduce your working hours in order to study part-time. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter: •Explain why you want to reduce your working hours, •Say which hours you would like to work, •Describe how your part-time studies would benefit your employer. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………….. , You get 20 minutes to complete this task.
Dear Mr. Smith,
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message finds you well. I am writing to express my interest in a post-graduate university major that would significantly enhance my skills and contribute positively to our team.
The major is Advanced Project Management and it will take almost one year beginning in the first week of February 2025. The lectures would be presented on Mondays and Wednesdays from 07:30 to 11:30 a.m. and focused on strategic planning, risk assessment, and resource allocation, all of which are vital for our ongoing projects.
Most importantly, to facilitate my participation, I would kindly request the company to consider for me 8 out of 40 hours per week off so that I can proceed with the course most effectively. Presumably, I can compensate for the above-mentioned off hours on Saturdays in the office or Sundays at home to handle my routine tasks. The good point is, that the classes are live online and I would not have to commute trips wasting my time.
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Ensure you explicitly mention how the company will benefit, which you have done well but could be even more explicitly linked to potential improvements.
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