The graph below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.

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The pie chart denotes CO2

emissions

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form

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from

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distinct forms of

vehicles

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in the European Union.

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, the highest spent

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transportations

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transportation

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is roads.

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, there are several

vehicles

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that possess the same percentages in a small percentage.

Firstly

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, there are only three

transportations

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transportation

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that

spend

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cause

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huge

emissions

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of CO2. Roads

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are

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numeruous

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numerous

than other

vehicles

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, and it spends 52%. The second position is railways

that

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which

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consumes

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consume

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the

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apply

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gas

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emissions

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that is

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31 per cent, and the next is public transport only 10 of percentage that expends

the

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apply

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emissions

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gas

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Secondly

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, there are several

vehicles

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that expend

gas

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emissions

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that

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are

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smallest

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the smallest

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. Ports and unknown have a similarity of spending

gas

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with

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value around 2%, and the leftovers are intermodal, inland

waterway

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waterways

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and airports

also

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possessing the same value

that is

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just 1 per cent.

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, a possibility of

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this

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these

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conditions is induced by how many the transportations

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distinguished from several types in that country.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, vehicles, gas with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

160 words

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