Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work that with their children To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answers.
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be able to study or consume some facilities as a child. Use synonyms
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, their parent should work together in order to make their Linking Words
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how to predict the possibilities of their issues.
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, home is the most suitable place for kids and Linking Words
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that most of our problems with social connections derive from our childhood and the atmosphere of our homes. Correct your spelling
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Hence
, the first place that people start to learn how to live is home and our Linking Words
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are our first teachers. So, at least each mother should decide to stop working out of the home before pregnancy.
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to sum up
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. The more they learn from family, the better action in social life.Use synonyms
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