Your friend is coming to your country from abroad, but you can't go to pick him up at the airport. Write a letter to him/her and say -why you can't pick him up -suggest alternative ideas -talk about what he can do in your country
Dear Vishal,
I was on cloud nine to hear that you are coming to Canada, but I would not be able to pick you up at the airport on the day of your arrival.
I know you were so excited to meet at the airport, but my father had a heart attack and he has been in
intensive
care unit since that. Correct article usage
the intensive
Therefore
, one person is allowed to stay with until
he Correct pronoun usage
them until
him until
her until
get
discharged. My mother has to stay at home to look after my little brother, so, I made the decision to stay with him.
Change the verb form
gets
However
, there are some suggestions to
how to get to your hotel. You can use Change preposition
on
private
taxi service, which is expensive, but it will save a lot of time because of the fast service Correct article usage
a private
is
provided. The Unnecessary verb
apply
taxies
are parked right in the front, Correct your spelling
taxis
while
you exit from the door. At same
time, you can public transport, which is cheaper, but slow and you have to have Add an article
the same
atleast
ten minutes to get Correct your spelling
at least
the
station.
There are many things that you can do as Canada is nature Change preposition
to the
rich
Correct your spelling
nature-rich
coutry
. You can visit Correct your spelling
country
CN
Correct article usage
the CN
tower
in Toronto, which is one of the largest buildings in the world. Capitalize word
Tower
However
, if you want to see some natural places, you can go to see Niagara Falls and if you like adventure, give a visit to Canada's wonderland, which will offer you plathera
of rides and more.
For Correct your spelling
plenty
for
your inconvenience, I hope you have a wonderful time!
Kind Regards
YudhveerChange preposition
apply
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structure
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to maintain clarity. While your paragraphs generally adhere to this, some are a bit crowded with multiple ideas. Try to separate different suggestions and explanations clearly into their own paragraphs.
coherence
Use clear and logical transitions between paragraphs to improve the flow of ideas. Linking words like 'However,' 'Additionally,' or 'Furthermore' can be used more effectively to connect your thoughts.
task response
Address all parts of the task consistently. You have covered the required points but need to provide fuller development of the suggestions for alternative transportation and outline the activities available in greater detail.
grammar
To enhance readability, avoid run-on sentences and correct punctuation mistakes. Shorter, more concise sentences could communicate your points more effectively.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite