The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The display maps
describes
the update that took place in Change the verb form
describe
public
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a public
the public
library
. The data about before and after is explained below.
Firstly
, The maps for the central library
20 years ago have three rooms that containing
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contain
Children
's books
, Reading
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a Reading
room
and Computer
games respectively. In the Library
hall
there are Add a comma
hall,
containing
tables and chairs in the centre of the Verb problem
apply
library
in front of the entrance, on the right side there are shelf
for adult non-fiction Fix the agreement mistake
shelves
books
and on the left side there are shelf
for adult fiction Fix the agreement mistake
shelves
books
. The enquiry desk located
on the right at the entrance door.
In the Central Add a missing verb
is located
library
now, there are several things that changed from the old central Capitalize word
Library
library
layout. The Computer
games replaced
by Add a missing verb
were replaced
Children
's book
and the old Fix the agreement mistake
books
Children
's book room
become
a lecture Wrong verb form
became
room
, meanwhile
the Add a comma
meanwhile,
computer
room
move
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moved
to
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into
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the reading
a reading
reading
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read
room
and they develop
one new Wrong verb form
developed
room
replacing the enquiry desk to
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with
cafe
. In Add an article
the cafe
a cafe
recent
central Correct article usage
the recent
library
hall, they remove the tables and chairs and in between children's
fiction book and Correct article usage
the children's
computer
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the computer
room
there is
all Change the verb form
are
reference
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the reference
books
and for the information desk they are in one place as the new seld-service
machines and adult fiction Correct your spelling
self-service
books
in between lecture
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the lecture
room
and cafe.
There is a great development in both library
and Fix the agreement mistake
libraries
to conclude
there are too many facilities compared to others. the above information gives a brief idea about the Central Library
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, children, books, room, computer with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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