Some people think that increasing communication usage of computers and mobile phones by young people has had a negative effect on their reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that using
laptops
and mobile devices may downgrade children's reading and writing abiltities
.I disagree with Correct your spelling
abilities
this
phenomenon because technological devices has
actually improved their writing and reading abilities Change the verb form
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in
these days.
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the
recent years, a lot of technological advancements like mobiles and computers Correct article usage
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has
emerged and Correct subject-verb agreement
have
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the way
way
of communication Fix the agreement mistake
ways
has
completely changed than past.Today, Correct subject-verb agreement
have
due to
the heavy usage of mobiles and laptops
, it also
influence
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influences
on
children's education.Today a number of classrooms are operated in Change preposition
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technological
environment.Teenagers are allowed Add an article
a technological
the technological
laptops
in that
smart classrooms under Correct determiner usage
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the
guidance and they Correct article usage
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into
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to
also
affect
positively on Change the verb form
affects
student's
reading Fix the agreement mistake
students'
skills
than past baucause
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because
a
number of reading apps and Change preposition
of a
websites
on internet
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the internet
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giving
access general public to read many ebooks once they Wrong verb form
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signed
up.It can be observed a large number of adolescents sign up for the Wrong verb form
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websites
and it is a positive side of improving their reading skills
.
When it comes to writing skills
, those devices escalate teens' writing ability in
these days by allowing different Change preposition
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websites
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to them. In the past, we Correct your spelling
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for gaining
writing Change preposition
to gain
skills
and correct them once we done
a paper.Today, even if in-person teaching Add a missing verb
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method
exist, teens can learn those things by themselves through Fix the agreement mistake
methods
internet
and they Correct article usage
the internet
also
be able to correct grammer
mistakes just in Correct your spelling
grammatical
one
minutes.Correct pronoun usage
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Therefore
it can be seen a massive improvement in writing than
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ago.Correct your spelling
decades
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grammer
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grammar
as well as
come
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their
suggestions.
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with
mobiles and Change preposition
that
laptops
affect negatively on teenagers bacause
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because
it
already Correct pronoun usage
they
improve
their reading and writing Change the verb form
improves
skills
by allowing access to different websites
and apps.Therefore
, students can reas
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read
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and correct grammatical errors by themselves thanks to these technological advancements.Add a hyphen
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