The diagram below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth

The first diagram shows the life cycle of the

silkworm

. The second diagram

depecits

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depicts

the production of

slik

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silk

cloth

. I will explain the life cycle of

silkworm

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silkworms

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and how the

cloth

is been manufactured in

following

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the following

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pragraphs

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paragraphs

.

Overall

,the diagram shows the stage of

silkworm

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silkworms

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and how

cocoons

are used for producing

a

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silk

cloth

through a simple

process

. To start,

at the first stage

moth lays eggs which form

silkworm

larva

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larvae

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after ten days.The larva feeds mulberry leaf as food and it takes four to six weeks to form silk thread and

then

it forms

cocoon

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a cocoon

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which

last

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for three to eight days.

Finally

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cocoon

becames

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becomes

became

adult

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an adult

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moth after

16days

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16 days

. The

process

of silk

cloth

begins with

the

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apply

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selecting the

cocoons

. The second

process

is

selected

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cocoons

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that is

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is

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are

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boiled in water in a pot.Boiled

cocoons

undergo

unwinding

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an unwinding

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process

and

changed

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are changed

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to 300meter to 900meter threads.

Next

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The next

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step is thread are twisted and those twisted threads are dyed and

then

used to produce

cloth

in the weaving stage.