The bar chart below shows the number of people who visited different museums in London during different months in 2015.
The bar chart depicts a
four-different
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different
museum
visited by people in London over 5 months in 2015.
Overall
, there was a peak season in August, followed by September and October. While
the highest number
of visitors
was British
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the British
Museum
in
average, Change preposition
on
National
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the National
museum
had the least popularity.
In June, all of the Capitalize word
Museum
museum
had nearly the same Change to a plural noun
museums
number
of visitors
around 400.000, except National
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the National
Museum
with approximately 200.000. By June, there had been no significant increase in the number
of visitors
.
In addition
, August was the most popular month to visit at
the Change preposition
apply
museum
. there was a rapid growth more
than 50 % of Change preposition
in more
individual
visiting at British Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
Museum
. This
number
also
was followed by History
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the History
museum
with Capitalize word
Museum
moderate
rise at about 200.000 Add an article
a moderate
visitors
compared from
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to
the
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apply
last
month. Both Science and National museum
only increase slightly to reach around 400.000 and 310.000, respectively. Capitalize word
Museum
Then
, the personal's
interest Change noun form
personal
to visit
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in visiting
at
the Change preposition
apply
museum
started to decrease steadily in the next two month
later, reaching Fix the agreement mistake
months
at
nearly the same level between June and July.Remove the preposition
apply
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