In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledgement or experience.

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enjoy the feeling when they read

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they can't read

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easier to be nearsighted than read

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book. So,

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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Relevant & specific examples

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