The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of retain the table shows where the money came from and the chart show how it was distributed summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons very relevant
The chart and table
depicts
the information about Correct subject-verb agreement
depict
share
of Add an article
the share
budget
which was distributed Add an article
the budget
a budget
on
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in
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particular
particulor
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particular
area
and Fix the agreement mistake
areas
share
of police officials over a Correct article usage
the share
year
period between 2017 and 2018
after the analysis, it is clearly stated that the source of money for national
government, a major department where most money went into, had an almost 2 Add an article
the national
a national
million
rise jumping from 175million to 177 million
while
, other sources remained constant over a year
period moreover
, local taxes saw a significant change in their souce
of income rising from 92 Correct your spelling
source
million
to 102 million
a sudden leap of 10 million
had been seen in one year
time. consequently
, the total budget
for law officials had increased of
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by
million
expanding from 304 million
to 318 million
furthermore
, A huge budget
had been spent on salaries for office staff and officials but still
a 6% of Add a comma
still,
drop
had been seen from 2017 to 2018 in Add an article
the drop
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contrast
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contrast
budget
spent on technology showed a change in their pattern unlike salaries rising from 8% to 17% almost double of that of Correct article usage
the budget
previous
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the previous
year
however
, building and transport showed no change on their trend and remained constant over an
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a
year
consuming 17% budget
overall
, it is clearly vividly manifested that national
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the national
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government
goverment
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government
remained
first when retaining the Verb problem
came
budget
coming from an area while
most budget
spent
on providing salaries to law Add a missing verb
was spent
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enforcement
enforment
and local staffCorrect your spelling
enforcement
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